Furturistic Scene Poster Design

i was finding it hard to come up with a poster for my groups's idea for the futuristic scene as i am not 1 that is in to futuristic settings and style. But i was looking around on the internet and in magazines and then i came across something with circles and i thought i could use this design to my advantage and make it in to something and this is what i produced. Im still not sure about the lens flare so some comments would be great to see what i could develop this poster into.

Motion Graphics

These are just some designers work of motion graphic (typography) I saw on the internet which caught my eye.
I would like to do work like this - I am looking more into this design of graphic design.
I just like how everything connects and the words have a meaning to this type of design.
I am treating this blog as a online design diary in a way to show the things I am into using video and images off the internet, it is easier then putting it all into a folder.

From Rhi's presentation I do think we have similar interests from the motion graphics of typography, to the graphic design of typography so we shall have to sit down and have a little chat about what we know possibly =].

50 motion graphic tips

Just scouting through the internet as media students do =] i came across a website to do with motion graphic - I thought it may be helpful to some in the class because i know Haych has an interest in it because we were talking about it on Tuesday.
Im doing some research into it but I am beginning to have a bigger interest in it the more & more I research into.
It is something I may consider doing for my FMP and in Uni.

http://www.computerarts.co.uk/in_depth/features/50_motion_graphics_tips

Bubble Diagram - Love & Hate

I also liked this advert when it first came out - I think the music works really well with what is going on in the advert itself - the music works to how the TV's actually move too. And how random is it that a pile of TV screens are just coming out of nowhere.
The TV's symbolise a game called Tetris - Don't know if any of you guys will know or remember that game, but its basically to Create horizontal lines using the falling blocks. When you make a line, it clears from the screen. The game is over when the blocks pile up and reach the top of the screen.

I do like the style and the technique used within this advert and I think its clever the way they used the TV's to combine together to make the car.

Orange Top Up =]

I absolutely love this little video of these shapes and objects. It just makes me smile =]
I would hopefully like to do something like this for my animation using characters of my own with the chosen theme i end up doing.

Here are some of my designs using typography

Could you possibly leave some comments of what u think?
or
What i could possible do to improve the designs?

(pweeze dont be too harsh!!!)